[Puisi] WAJAH MU !

sedikit catatan kecil dari  gw .Kenal kamu dengan sederhana, walau usiamu tak lagi muda
Dengan mu aku bisa menumpahkan kegelisahaan, kesenangan dan juga kemarahan.

Dengan mu aku bisa melihat,
- wajah terkasih
- wajah temanku
- wajah keluargaku
- wajah kasetku
- wajah ekspresiku
- dan wajah wajah lainya

Denganmu aku bisa mendengar,
- suara kerinduan
- suara kebencian
- suara kebisingan
- suara gemuruh
- dan suara suara lainya

Lihat rupamu yang selalu begitu, tidak berubah walau dalam posisi apapun
Terkadang kau buat aku geleng geleng kepala tapi aku tetap perhatikan kamu
Sempat tergoda dengan yang lain yang lebih modis, lebih okeh tapi belum lah
Aku belum terpikir tuk tinggalkan kamu, kecuali kamu yang duluan.

Aku sempat tertidur dihadapanmu......

salam manis, renyah dan gurih.
- dOeL
# ini dia wajah komputer di rumah gw, karena gw nggak pandai bikin puisi maka catatan ini mungkin bisa mewakili [mudah2an ngerti ]
whuahahahahaaa... walo doi sering sakit dan ngeheng gw masih bisa atasi jadi gak usah kedokter..mudah2an ada yg ngasih gw laptop :D ..kabooorr pake sepeda BMX..wusssss

Original Post : Feb 18, '08 9:48 AM

delete reply merynaneh wrote on Feb 18, '08 Astaga....

delete reply merynaneh wrote on Feb 18, '08 Aq nyang pertama!

delete reply faridrock wrote on Feb 18, '08 3

delete reply ngesot wrote on Feb 18, '08 4 deh doel

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 18, '08 5. deh weqs.... bagus kan puisi gw :D

delete reply merynaneh wrote on Feb 18, '08 Aq nyang ke 6. Puisimu bgus tapi maksa

delete reply eindut wrote on Feb 18, '08 halah...

delete reply faridrock wrote on Feb 18, '08 ga ngerti saiah nih tak kasih liad monitorku

delete reply merynaneh wrote on Feb 18, '08 Pada pamer mOnitor iks...

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 18, '08 merynaneh said Aq nyang ke 6. Puisimu bgus tapi maksa kalo ga dipaksa ga jadi2 Mer :D

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 18, '08 faridrock said ga ngerti saiah nih tak kasih liad monitorku jahhhhh monitor dipoto juga dobel dong :D

delete reply faridrock wrote on Feb 18, '08 merynaneh said Pada pamer mOnitor iks... pake hape ya?

delete reply faridrock wrote on Feb 18, '08 jamesdoel said jahhhhh monitor dipoto juga dobel dong :D maksud lohhh? XP

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 18, '08 jahh ei :p pamer komputer bodong... tanpa maksud Rid ....xixixixi

delete reply merynaneh wrote on Feb 18, '08 Pake tipi!

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 18, '08 merynaneh said Pake tipi! ga pake sempak yah..//betulin antena

delete reply merynaneh wrote on Feb 18, '08 DESkTopnyah bAnyak icoNnyah....

delete reply merynaneh wrote on Feb 18, '08 Maksudlo?

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 18, '08 dekstop nya isi miyabi semuwaaaaaa :P ga ada maksud Mer..lempeng aja

delete reply merynaneh wrote on Feb 18, '08 :p

delete reply faridrock wrote on Feb 18, '08 nyang penting bisa OL sepuasnyah wakakakakak mau pake tanktop dimarahi sama mamah wakakakakak

delete reply merynaneh wrote on Feb 18, '08 :p

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 18, '08 //make baju yu kensi my ketek

delete reply faridrock wrote on Feb 18, '08 wakakakakak laptop tauuu

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 18, '08 laptop si unyil ?

delete reply faridrock wrote on Feb 18, '08 si kutul

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 18, '08 ohh jadi luw yg selama ini di empat mata ?

delete reply faridrock wrote on Feb 18, '08

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 18, '08 cieeeee pamer poto niyeeeee...mirip ternyata//gayane miring..:P

delete reply faridrock wrote on Feb 18, '08 sealan ganteng gue tauu heuheuheu apeu!

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 18, '08 hampir lucu........

delete reply faridrock wrote on Feb 18, '08 kok hampir? suka yang semi yah?

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 18, '08 ga juga, kadang2 nongton yg final...

delete reply faridrock wrote on Feb 18, '08 waks kamu gak normal mya dasar santri!! hehehe

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 18, '08 makasih atas pujiannya..//ngumpet dikaleng krupuk

delete reply faridrock wrote on Feb 18, '08 XD PCku aja jelek kok! http://faridrock.multiply.com/journal/item/173

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 18, '08 ga muncul gambar nya :(

delete reply falsettoholic wrote on Feb 18, '08 oooh, jualan monitor ya? berapa duit Doel? :D

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 18, '08 yg berapa inch Fik, harga damai deh :P Plasma atau Flat xixixixixi

delete reply greenvhia wrote on Feb 19, '08 jamesdoel said makasih atas pujiannya..//ngumpet dikaleng krupuk icon kaleng kurup...kikikikiki

delete reply greenvhia wrote on Feb 19, '08 jah..salah ketik..maksudnya icon kaleng krupuk.....// sarapan....

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 20, '08 nerves lu Pia ?

delete reply greenvhia wrote on Feb 21, '08 ga tuh...

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 22, '08 ah masa ah iya...

delete reply greenvhia wrote on Feb 22, '08 ya iyalah....

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 22, '08 kapan ketemu nih..kangen juga..[makan2 ] :P

delete reply dian89 wrote on Feb 25, '08 - dan suara suara lainya.. suara pa-an yak bang..??.. :D //ngintip loe gie ngebokep...

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 25, '08 dian89 said - dan suara suara lainya.. suara pa-an yak bang..??.. :D //ngintip loe gie ngebokep... bukannya film 3 gp nya dari luw...

delete reply dian89 wrote on Feb 25, '08 bukan...!!

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 25, '08 oh iya luw pelakunya...jadi ceritanya ga tau yah..lupa gw....

delete reply dian89 wrote on Feb 25, '08 loe aja lupa.. napa bisa nuduh gwa yg nglakuin..??... //angkat2 rok..

edit delete reply jamesdoel wrote on Feb 25, '08 waktu itu kan ngelakuin nya ga sadar..tapi SARKAM = SAdaR KAMera whuahahahaha...bibirr cleepots..